What are you passionate about?
학생이 쓴 원문
When i draw picture that is wanted landscape, i’m passionate.
And if i have hate friend, i want to win this friend. So i become passionate.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]! You really love drawing landscapes and when you have a friend you\'re not getting along with, you\'re determined to fix things. That\'s great!
~T. Jenna
When i draw picture that is wanted landscape, i’m passionate.
>>When I draw a picture of a wanted landscape, I\'m passionate.
OR
>> I\'m passionate about drawing landscapes.
And if i have hate friend, i want to win this friend.
And if i have hate friend, i want to win this friend.
>>And if I have a friend I hate, I want to win this friend over.
OR
>>And I am passionate about winning over a friend I hate when we\'re not getting along.
So i become passionate.
>>So, these are the things I am passionate about.
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