What are you passionate about?
학생이 쓴 원문
I still have a passion for some hobbies eventhough my interest level of those was decreased.
I like swimming and playing game and watching TV.
I learned swim for few years. I usually went to the swimming pool three times a week. however I can\'t go swimming pool these days.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you for talking about what your most passionate about. I hope to hear more about this in our classes.
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I still have a passion for some hobbies eventhough my interest level of those was decreased.
>>I still have a passion for some hobbies even though my interest in them has decreased.
I like swimming and playing game and watching TV.
>>I like swimming, playing games, and watching TV.
I learned swim for few years. I usually went to the swimming pool three times a week.
>>I learned to swim for a few years and usually went to the swimming pool three times a week.
however I can\'t go swimming pool these days.
>> However, I can\'t go to the swimming pool these days.
>>I still have a passion for some hobbies even though my interest in them has decreased.
I like swimming and playing game and watching TV.
>>I like swimming, playing games, and watching TV.
I learned swim for few years. I usually went to the swimming pool three times a week.
>>I learned to swim for a few years and usually went to the swimming pool three times a week.
however I can\'t go swimming pool these days.
>> However, I can\'t go to the swimming pool these days.
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