What are you thankful for?
학생이 쓴 원문
I\'m thankful for my health.
I think that one of the most important things in life is health.
Because I can have various experiences only when I am healthy.
And I can also get less disease when I am healthy.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! :)
I think that one of the most important things in life is health.
Because I can have various experiences only when I am healthy.
And I can also get less disease when I am healthy.
Thank you so much for answering your homework.
Have a wonderful day. :)
- Tricia
I\'m thankful for my health.
>>CORRECT!
I think that one of the most important things in life is health.
>> I think that\'s one of the most important things in life is health.
Because I can have various experiences only when I am healthy.
>> CORRECT!
And I can also get less disease when I am healthy.
>> CORRECT!
OR>> And I can also get less disease.
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