What are you thankful for this year?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! ^^
Well I\'m glad to hear that your son has adjusted well to the school.
I know this is a very delicate time for both you and the kids.
But it\'ll be alright. ^^
Thank you for sharing this with me!
See you again soon.
~t. Ally
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I have one son and a daughter.
>> I have a son and a daughter.
My son entered the elementary school this year.
>> CORRECT!
My wife and I was really worried if he could adapt well in the new environment.
>> My wife and I were really worried if he would be able to adapt well in his new environment.
He is shy, inactive and introverted.
>> CORRECT!
That is why I was worried about my son\'s school life.
>> CORRECT!
However, my son has made quite a lot of friends.
>> CORRECT!
Furthermore, he participated all programs at school actively.
>> Furthermore, he participated in all programs at school actively.
He went to school with my mother-in-law three months ago, but he can go to school by himself without any guardian these days.
>> CORRECT!
Our family lived in the UAE for 3 years.
>> CORRECT!
At that time my son attended the nursery which had a English curriculum.
>> At that time, my son attended a nursery which had an English curriculum.
He even couldn\'t speak English and couldn\'t understand what teachers said.
>> He couldn\'t even speak English and couldn\'t understand what his teachers said.
As I explained above, he has a introverted personality and has a problem to make friends.
>> As I explained above, he has an introverted personality and has a problem to make friends.
So, He was suffering with adapting a new environment.
>> So, He was suffering with adapting to a new environment.
I guess that his personality have been changed since he came back to Korea from the UAE.
>> I guess that his personality has been changed since he came back to Korea from the UAE.
I appreciate that my son adapted the school very well than I expected.
>> I appreciate that my son has adapted to the school better than I expected.
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