What are you thoughts about having face to face classes even if there\'s a pandemic still?
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I think the non-face-to-face class should continue. I think it is still dangerous to have face-to-face classes because the coronavirus is easy to infect and dangerous viruses that do not know where they will be infected. Perhaps it is best to have face-to-face classes after the vaccine is released and distributed to the general public.
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Hi Steve! I couldn\'t agree more. They are putting the children at risk by this. It\'s only safe to mingle with people if you already have the vaccine.
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I think the non-face-to-face class should continue.
>> I think non face-to-face class should continue.
I think it is still dangerous to have face-to-face classes because the coronavirus is easy to infect and dangerous viruses that do not know where they will be infected.
>> I think it is still dangerous to have face-to-face classes because people can still be easily infected by the corona and other dangerous viruses as well.
Perhaps it is best to have face-to-face classes after the vaccine is released and distributed to the general public.
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