What are you thoughts about having face to face classes even if there\'s a pandemic still?
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I think it\'s good to have face to face. In korea, The government started to give people vaccines before 2 days ago. They have a plan to give all of people in korea untill December,2021. So I think we can go anywhere without mask in 2022
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Hi [이름]! Wow that sounds great! I wish that our country has the same plan as well.
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I think it\'s good to have face to face.
>> I think it\'s good to have face to face classes already.
In korea, The government started to give people vaccines before 2 days ago.
>> In Korea, the government has already given vaccines to the people 2 days ago.
They have a plan to give all of people in korea untill December,2021.
>> They have a deadline that everyone in Korea should be vaccinated before December, 2021.
So I think we can go anywhere without mask in 2022
>> CORRECT
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