What are your 2024 wishes?
학생이 쓴 원문
My main objects are three things. First, I hope to speak English well. Second, I hope to be recognized in the company. The last one is that my children will be healthy without problems.
The most important ones to me are the first and third.
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
Thank you for answering your homework!
~T. Divina^^
Here are some things to take note of:
1. My main objects are three things.
>>I have three main objectives.
2. First, I hope to speak English well.
>>CORRECT!
3. Second, I hope to be recognized in the company.
>>Second, I hope to be recognized by the company.
4. The last one is that my children will be healthy without problems.
>>CORRECT!
5. The most important ones to me are the first and third.
>>CORRECT!
5. The most important ones to me are the first and third.
>>The most important ones to me are the first and the third.
(I hope your wishes come true!^^)
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