What are your bad behaviors and how are you going to change them?
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What are your bad behaviors and how are you going to change them?
I have habit of eating food fast.
When I eat something food, I am always thinking about chewing often and slowly.
Habit of eating quick fast is well than in the past.
However, it is hard to get rid of a bad habit.
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Bad habits interrupt your life and prevent you from accomplishing your goals. They jeopardize your health - both mentally and physically. And they waste your time and energy.
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I have habit of eating food fast.
>> I have a habit of eating fast.
When I eat something food, I am always thinking about chewing often and slowly.
>> When I eat some food, I always think about chewing slowly.
Habit of eating quick fast is well than in the past.
>> I had this habit since before.
However, it is hard to get rid of a bad habit.
>> CORRECT
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