What are your bad behaviors and how are you going to change them?
학생이 쓴 원문
One of my bad behaviors is not exercising.
I am well aware that I have to exercise to prevent muscle loss.
But I hate exercise so much. It seems to me more difficult than others .
I signed up for a gym to exercise consistently.
Also I do stretching before going to bed.
강사 첨삭
Hi Jennifer:)
Bad habits interrupt your life and prevent you from accomplishing your goals. They jeopardize your health - both mentally and physically. And they waste your time and energy.
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One of my bad behaviors is not exercising.
>> CORRECT
I am well aware that I have to exercise to prevent muscle loss.
>> CORRECT
But I hate exercise so much.
>> But I hate exercising so much.
It seems to me more difficult than others .
>> It seems more difficult for me than others.
I signed up for a gym to exercise consistently.
>> CORRECT
Also I do stretching before going to bed.
>> CORRECT
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