What are your bad behaviors and how are you going to change them?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t usually do this but I sometimes speak bad words to other people.
If I get surprise or if I had unlucky or angry events, then I speak bad words.
But I think I can stop speaking bad words when I had unlucky or angry events because what I have to do is just control my emotions.
The problem is I can\'t stop speaking bad words when I get surprised about something.
It is very hard to stop because it became one of my habits.
So I think if I want to stop it, I have to use right words and I shouldn\'t think about the bad words.
The reason that I am speaking bad words is it became one of my habits.
So I have to have a new great habit that speaking right words to other people.
If I keep doing it, it will be my habit so I think I can fix speaking bad words.
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Bad habits interrupt your life and prevent you from accomplishing your goals. They jeopardize your health - both mentally and physically. And they waste your time and energy.
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I don\'t usually do this but I sometimes speak bad words to other people.
>> I don\'t usually do this but I sometimes say bad words to other people.
If I get surprise or if I had unlucky or angry events, then I speak bad words.
>> If I get surprise or something unlucky happens, I curse.
>> If I get surprise or something unlucky happens, I curse.
But I think I can stop speaking bad words when I had unlucky or angry events because what I have to do is just control my emotions.
>> Sometimes I can\'t help but do it because I can\'t control my emotions.
The problem is I can\'t stop speaking bad words when I get surprised about something.
>> The problem is that I do it unconsciously.
It is very hard to stop because it became one of my habits.
>> CORRECT
So I think if I want to stop it, I have to use right words and I shouldn\'t think about the bad words.
>> So I think if I want to stop it, I have to use the right words and I shouldn\'t think about bad words.
The reason that I am speaking bad words is it became one of my habits.
>> The reason behind this is because it has become one of my habits.
So I have to have a new great habit that speaking right words to other people.
>> So I need to come up with a new good habit.
If I keep doing it, it will be my habit so I think I can fix speaking bad words.
>> If I keep doing it, it will be my habit so I think I can fix this bad one.
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