What are your beliefs pertaining to a person\'s soul once they have died?
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So dryly, I don\'t think people\'s soul exist after their death.
>>> So dryly??? I don\'t think people\'s soul exist after their death.
Soul is strongly combined with body.
>>> correct
When our body are gone, our soul disappear as well.
>>> When our body is gone, our soul disappears as well.
Our mind effect our body and the body\'s condition influence our soul.
>>> Our mind affect our body and the body\'s condition influence our soul.
In my opinion, thinking can be handed down by inheritances like books,
but soul can not exist without body and it can not be bequeathed to our descendant.
>>> correct
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