: What are your challenges when it comes to speaking?
학생이 쓴 원문
It is difficult for me to express my thoughts in English.
Some problems are there.
First, I forget many words and it is not easy to remember them again.
Second,I am not used to making sentence structure .
Personally, I think repetition is the best way to improve,
but my effort is not enough yet.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] [이름]!
This is a good way to start the week.
I hope you will be consistent with your writing moving forward.
Check the corrections below.^^
~ Teacher Sharon
It is difficult for me to express my thoughts in English.
>> Correct
Some problems are there.
Some problems are there.
>> Some problems are present.
First, I forget many words and it is not easy to remember them again.
First, I forget many words and it is not easy to remember them again.
>> Correct
Second,I am not used to making sentence structure .
Second,I am not used to making sentence structure .
>> Second, I am not used to following sentence structure .
Personally, I think repetition is the best way to improve, but my effort is not enough yet.
Personally, I think repetition is the best way to improve, but my effort is not enough yet.
>> Correct
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