What are your daily habits?
학생이 쓴 원문
My daily habit is related to smell. In the morning I turn on the candle warmer to smell it. Actually I sensitive to smell. I want to start with a good smell in the morning. And I put on perfurm
when I go to outside. Nowadays I put on cool smells perfume.
It gives me a pleasant day. I also put on perfum before I sleep. I put on the soft and aromatic smells.it makes me relax.
Another daily habit is write a English sentence. Like this homework or diary. Sometimes I want to pass just one day. But, if I didn\'t I got a sense of guilty. In weekend, I write a short English news ore stories. So I make my English note. I write something what I learn every day. The notes is my perfectly studying textbook. I want know what written in the note.
If I look what I wrote everyday I feel proud and I want to full a empty section. So it can be continue the habit.
I wish I want to continue this habit for a long time.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름] [이름]!
It\'s nice to practice speaking and writing at the same time. Reading your corrections and memorizing the correct ones would also help you improve your skills. ^^
It\'s nice to practice speaking and writing at the same time. Reading your corrections and memorizing the correct ones would also help you improve your skills. ^^
~T. Maine
My daily habit is related to smell.
>>Correct.
In the morning I turn on the candle warmer to smell it.
>>In the morning, I turn on the candle warmer to smell it.
Actually I sensitive to smell.
>>Actually, I am sensitive to scents.
>>OR: I have a sensitive smell.
I want to start with a good smell in the morning.
>>I want to start my day with something that smells good.
And I put on perfurm
when I go to outside.
when I go to outside.
>>So I put on some perfume when I go outside.
Nowadays I put on cool smells perfume.
>>Nowadays, I spray some cool scents perfume.
>>Nowadays, I spray some cool scents perfume.
It gives me a pleasant day.
>>Correct.
I also put on perfum before I sleep.
>>I also use some fragrance before I go to bed.
I put on the soft and aromatic smells.
>> I put on soft and aromatic scents.
it makes me relax.
>>It makes me relax.
Another daily habit is write a English sentence. Like this homework or diary.
Another daily habit is write a English sentence. Like this homework or diary.
>>Another daily habit is writing English sentences like this homework or diary.
Sometimes I want to pass just one day.
>>Correct.
But, if I didn\'t I got a sense of guilty. In weekend, I write a short English news ore stories.
>>But if I don\'t get a sense of guilt, on the weekend, I write short English news or stories.
So I make my English note.
>>So I make English notes.
I write something what I learn every day.
>>I write something that I want to learn every day.
The notes is my perfectly studying textbook.
>>The notes are perfect for my studies.
I want know what written in the note.
>>I want to know what I have written in my notes.
>>I want to know what I have written in my notes.
If I look what I wrote everyday I feel proud and I want to full a empty section.
>>If I look at what I wrote every day, I feel proud and I want to fill the empty section of the page.
So it can be continue the habit.
>>So it can be continued as a good habit.
I wish I want to continue this habit for a long time.
I wish I want to continue this habit for a long time.
>> I wish to continue this habit for a long time.
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