What are your daily routines?
학생이 쓴 원문
1. What are your daily routines?
My daily routines are different according to a day of the week. I get up early in the morning. I generally go to the library to read the
books and study English from 10 am to 3 pm. I walk along Han river for around two hours to stay healthy at 4 pm. and I watch TV
before I go to bed.
2. Why is it advisable to follow a strict schedule?
Following a strict schedule is necessary to exercise regularly and steadily. So we should go to gym and advise how to work out.
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What are your daily routines?
1. What are your daily routines?
My daily routines are different according to a day of the week.
My daily routines are different according to a day of the week.
>>My daily routines are different according to the day of the week.
I get up early in the morning.
CORRECT!
or>>I wake up in the morning at a very early time.
I generally go to the library to read the books and study English from 10 am to 3 pm.
>>I generally go to the library to read books and study English from 10 a.m. to 3 p.m.
I walk along Han river for around two hours to stay healthy at 4 p.m.
CORRECT!
or>>I walk along Han river at 4 p.m. for a couple of hours to stay healthy.
And I watch TV before I go to bed.
CORRECT!
CORRECT!
or>>And before I go to sleep, I watch some programs on TV.
2. Why is it advisable to follow a strict schedule?
Following a strict schedule is necessary to exercise regularly and steadily.
Following a strict schedule is necessary to exercise regularly and steadily.
CORRECT!
or>>Following a strict schedule is necessary in order to be able to exercise regularly and steadily.
So we should go to gym and advise how to work out.
>>So we should go to the gym so we can get some advise on how to work out.
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