What are your expectations for yourself this month?
학생이 쓴 원문
Since this month has already past quite a lot, I\'ll set next month\'s expectations for myself. I expect myself to always send assignments on due dates on time. Because this is my first semester in my new school so, I don\'t want to get a bad impression by teachers. I\'ll always try hard to finish my homework perfectly and then submit it on time. Also, even if I have too much of school works to do, I\'ll try my best to sleep at least before 11. When I don\'t sleep enough, I really can\'t have a good and easy day. If I sleep late, then it will be a tiring day. This leads to bad attitude in class like sleepy face or can\'t understand well..
I hope to adapt well in this new school because still I am so nervous before going to the school. I wish to sleep just like I want even there are much things to do, and do the tasks given everyday.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]! I admire your clear goals and determination! Starting a new school is challenging, but focusing on timely assignments and good sleep will help you succeed. Getting enough rest keeps your mind sharp and your mood positive. Keep planning ahead. You’re doing great! How are your classes so far?
Writing tip: Try to keep sentences concise and avoid repeating the same words too often to make your writing smoother and clearer.
-T. Sonny
Since this month has already past quite a lot,
>>Since a large part of this month has already passed.
I\'ll set next month\'s expectations for myself.
>>Correct!
I expect myself to always send assignments on due dates on time.
>>I expect myself to always submit assignments on time, by their due dates.
Because this is my first semester in my new school so, I don\'t want to get a bad impression by teachers.
>>This is my first semester at a new school so I don’t want to make a bad impression on my teachers.
I\'ll always try hard to finish my homework perfectly and then submit it on time.
>>I’ll try hard to complete my homework perfectly and submit it on time.
Also, even if I have too much of school works to do, I\'ll try my best to sleep at least before 11.
>>Also, even if I have a lot of schoolwork, I’ll do my best to sleep before 11 p.m.
When I don\'t sleep enough, I really can\'t have a good and easy day.
>>When I don’t get enough sleep, I can’t have a good or easy day.
If I sleep late, then it will be a tiring day.
>>If I sleep late, I feel tired the next day.
This leads to bad attitude in class like sleepy face or can\'t understand well..
>>This leads to a bad attitude in class, such as looking sleepy or having trouble understanding lessons.
I hope to adapt well in this new school because still I am so nervous before going to the school.
I hope to adapt well in this new school because still I am so nervous before going to the school.
>>I hope to adapt well to this new school, though I still feel nervous before going.
I wish to sleep just like I want even there are much things to do, and do the tasks given everyday.
>>I wish I could sleep as much as I want, even when there’s a lot to do, and still complete all my tasks each day.
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