What are your expectations in Malaysia? What else will you do there? give me five answers and explai

2018-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Gray

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First, As you know I don’t go for travel I go to work. Actually, It’s my first time to get a job. So, I expect about my office life. It is going to be hard, but I want to enjoy it. Second, the company I will work is a multinational corporation. The head office is located in Belgium and there are so many branches all over the world. So, most of the business are progressed by English. Now, my English skill is very lack but I believe I can improve my ability during work. Third, as policy of my company, I will go business trip frequently. Already I have schedule to go to China in May. So, I really expect to travel many countries of course including Malaysia. Fourth, I like swim and marine sports. In Malaysia I can enjoy many marine sports. I want to do scuba diving. I’ve never done the scuba diving. It can be a new experience to me. Last, I expect to meet many other people. I can be friend with foreigners. Though they are very different with the Koreans, I expect to be friend with them.

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First, As you know I don’t go for travel I go to work.

>> First, just so you know I will not go there for a vacation. Because, I will go there for my work.


Actually, It’s my first time to get a job. So, I expect about my office life.

>> It\'s my first time to get a job actually. So, I\'m expecting an office life.


It is going to be hard, but I want to enjoy it.

>> CORRECT


Second, the company I will work is a multinational corporation.

>> CORRECT


The head office is located in Belgium and there are so many branches all over the world.

>> CORRECT

>> OR: The head office is located in Belgium and there are a lot of branches all over the world.


So, most of the business are progressed by English.

>> CORRECT


Now, my English skill is very lack but I believe I can improve my ability during work.

>> My English skill is still lacking something for now. But, I believe I can improve my ability at work.


Third, as policy of my company, I will go business trip frequently.

>> Third, as policy of my company, I will go on business trips frequently.


Already I have schedule to go to China in May. So, I really expect to travel many countries of course including Malaysia.

>> I already have a schedule to go to China by May. So, I\'m expecting to travel to many countries of course. and including Malaysia.


Fourth, I like swim and marine sports.

>> Fourth I like swimming and marine sports.


In Malaysia I can enjoy many marine sports. I want to do scuba diving.

>> I can enjoy a lot of marine sports in Malaysia. I want to do scuba diving.


I’ve never done the scuba diving. It can be a new experience to me.

>> And, I\'ve never done scuba diving. So, it can be a new experience for me.


Last, I expect to meet many other people.

>> And lastly, I\'m expecting to meet a lot of new people.


I can be friend with foreigners.

>> I can friends with foreigners too!

>> OR: I can be a friend to foreigners too!


Though they are very different with the Koreans, I expect to be friend with them.

>> Though they are a lot different with Koreans. I\'m expecting to be friends with them.



Hello Eun-Pyun!

       Awesome job on your homework today Eun-Pyun! ^^ I\'m happy to hear about your job soon! ah, by the way you notice about me changing \"I expect\" to \"I\'m expecting\". when you use

\"I expect\" it shows a little bit of anger or aggression that you\'re demanding for it to happen. But, when you use \"I am expecting\" or \"I\'m expecting\" it shows that you\'re being friendly and being polite ^^ like you Eun-Pyun I believe in you and I know that you can improve your English skill ^^ you can do it! kkk fighting!! ^^


-Teacher Gray :D

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