What are your expectations of paris when you get the chance to go there again?
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When I get the chance to go paris,
I look forward to the ambiance of that city, and popular events like newspaper.
All night arts and culture event that sees crowds through the streets for free exhibits and performances,
And also,
If i can visit there in winter, then i can ice skating rinks, and visit christmas markets.
Many of the city’s most glamorous department stores have impressive light and window displays.
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Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate it very much. Thank you for sharing your expectations. I hope the next time you get to visit Paris, you won\'t be disappointed again. Good job and see you in class tomorrow.
What are your expectations of paris when you get the chance to go there again?
>>> What are your expectations of Paris when you get the chance to go there again?
When I get the chance to go paris, I look forward to the ambiance of that city, and popular events like newspaper.
>>> When I get the chance to go to Paris, I look forward to the ambiance of that city and popular events like the one mentioned in the newspaper.
All night arts and culture event that sees crowds through the streets for free exhibits and performances,
>>> I also want to see the all-night arts festival that has crowds flocking the streets for free exhibits and performances.
>>> When I get the chance to go to Paris, I look forward to the ambiance of that city and popular events like the one mentioned in the newspaper.
All night arts and culture event that sees crowds through the streets for free exhibits and performances,
>>> I also want to see the all-night arts festival that has crowds flocking the streets for free exhibits and performances.
And also, If i can visit there in winter, then i can ice skating rinks, and visit christmas markets.
>>> Also, if I can visit in winter, I can go to ice skating rinks and visit Christmas markets.
Many of the city’s most glamorous department stores have impressive light and window displays.
>>> Many of the city’s most glamorous department stores have impressive lighting and window displays.
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