What are your expectations of the class? [homework]

2019-10-04 · 첨삭 강사 Kate

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I am expecting to improve my English skill in business field. I have worked as civil engineer for 5~6 years in my present company. Now I\'d like to move to other position from engineer to EM or PM. (Engineering Manager, Project Manager) Those position require high level English ability to me. Because of this reason, I am planning to train my language skill with power English. Please let me know various expression for business. I want to get a chance to speak English each other as well. All of these process will make me more fluent. So I hope to make good class for my development.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ed!

Thank you for sending your first ever composition with me. I think you did really great! Please keep up the good work! ^^

~~Teacher Kate

I am expecting to improve my English skill in business field.

>>I am expecting to improve my English skills in the business field.
I have worked as civil engineer for 5~6 years in my present company.

>>CORRECT!
Now I\'d like to move to other positions from engineer to EM or PM (Engineering Manager, Project Manager).

>>CORRECT!

Those position require high level English ability to me.

>>Those positions require me to have high-level English abilities.
Because of this reason, I am planning to train my language skill with power English.

>>CORRECT!
Please let me know various expression for business.

>>Please let me know various expressions for business.
I want to get a chance to speak English each other as well.

>>I want us to get a chance to speak in English casually with each other as well.
All of these process will make me more fluent.

>>All of these processes will make me more fluent.
So I hope to make good class for my development.

>>So, I hope to do good in class for my development.

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