What are your favorite animals and why do you like them?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite animals are cheetah.Because they can run fast and their face is cute. And their fur's color is great and soft. I think lion and tiger are more scary than cheeetah. Someday, I want to see cheetah.
<Diary>
Topic:My best friend Eric
Eric is my best friend.We have lots of common point.We have glasses and one teeth is broken.We has same height and weight.We like playing chess and also like reading a book and so on.We met at preschool.When we have first class at preschool Eric asks to do you want to be a friend.So, I accpet.And after 4years we finally a best friend.Our house is far.And we talking about "Would you move in to near my house."
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름] ^^
Thank you for making your homework today.
So, Cheetah is your favorite animl. Great ^^
I read your diary too and it seems you consider Eric as your brother.
I know that Eric is a nice person and I know that you care about him. :)
I hope that your friendship will last long.
Take care always [이름].
~~T.kris
My favorite animals are cheetah. Because they can run fast and their face is cute.
>> My favorite animals are cheetahs because they can run fast and their faces are cute.
And their fur\'s color is great and soft.
>> Their fur\'s color is greatand soft, too.
I think lion and tiger are more scary than cheeetah.
>> I think lion and tigers are more scarier than Cheetahs.
Someday, I want to see cheetah.
>> I hope to see a Cheetah someday. <Diary>Topic:My best friend Eric
>> CorrectEric is my best friend.
>> Correct
We have lots of common point.
>> We have lots of common.
We have glasses and one teeth is broken.
>> We wear the same eyeglasses and one of our teeth is broken, too.
We has same height and weight.
>> We have tje same height and weight.
We like playing chess and also like reading a book and so on.
>> We like playing chess and we also like reading books.
We met at preschool.
>> Correct
When we have first class at preschool Eric asks to do you want to be a friend.
>> When we had our first class at preschool, Eric asked me, \" Can you be my friend?\"
So, I accpet.And after 4years we finally a best friend.
>> So, I said, \"Yes!\". And after four years, we finally became best friends.
Our house is far.
>> The distance between our houses is far.
And we talking about \"Would you move in to near my house.\"
>> And we sometimes ask each other this question, \"Would you move in near my house?\".
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