What are your favorite cultural heritages so far?

2022-04-04 · 첨삭 강사 Faith

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I have been visit Italy. At that time I visited various cultural heritage. Most favorite that I have seen heritage is Duomo in Milano.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Emily! It must have been so exciting for you to see it. Thank you for writing. I apologize for not having the class earlier. See you later! -Faith-
I have been visit Italy. 
>> I have visited Italy before. 
At that time I visited various cultural heritage.
>> At that time, I visited various cultural heritages.
Most favorite that I have seen heritage is Duomo in Milano.
>> My most favorite heritage that I have seen was Duomo in Milano. 

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