What are your favorite forms of exercise? Why do you like them?
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Hi my friend^^
I guess you can play with her again if you will contact her.
Maybe you can give her a call this weekend and hang out with her? What do you think?
Good luck^^
I like jogging, (taking a walk), swimming, and badminton.
>>I like jogging, swimming, and badminton.
I used to take swimming lessons regularly when i was in elementary but almost never went swmiing after that.
>>I used to take swimming lessons regularly in elementary school, but after that I rarely went swimming.
but i still remember how i love to be in the water and feeling fresh after swimming.
>>But I still remember how much I love being in the water and feeling fresh after swimming.
For jogging, I think it is the most efficient way of exercise.
>>I think jogging is the most efficient way to exercise.
You can take a walk everywhere almost anytime.
>>You can take a walk almost anytime, anywhere.
I also used to go out and walk for an hour everyday on the road beside the lake, and I loved the feeling of listening to music and enjoying the scenery.
>>Also, I used to walk outside for an hour every day on the road next to the lake, and I loved listening to music and enjoying the scenery.
I wasnt that interested, neither was good at playing badminton..
>>I wasn\'t that interested neither was good at playing badminton.
before I met my friend in middle school and she was a pro player for the school. in P.E class, we often played badminton together and that massively increased my badminton skills.
>>Before I met a friend in middle school, she was a professional player in the school. In PE class, we often play badminton together, and because of that, our badminton skills have improved a lot.
I wish to play with her again sometime.
>>I wish to play with her again someday.
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