What are your fears?
학생이 쓴 원문
I always try to live positively.
However, I am afraid that my initiation will change as I live.
And I think that money is not everything in life.
I am afraid that the values will collapse.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! I\'m happy to share this quote for you.
\"Train your mind to see the good in everything. Positivity is a choice. The happiness of your life depends on the quality of your thoughts.\"
-Anonymous
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
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OR>>I always try to live in a positive way.
However, I am afraid that my initiation will change as I live.
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OR>>However, I am afraid that my path will change as I live.
And I think that money is not everything in life.
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I am afraid that the values will collapse.
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