What are your first-day expectations at work? Share your answer in a few sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
To be honest, I have no idea for the first day. However, I can have an expectation of that such as introduction of schedule and greeting with coworkers. Apart from that, about the whole running time schedules like lunch, resting of twice the day and so on. I just hope that it would be easier to hear the manager\'s speech than I am worried. Nevertheless, I am excited to experience a new life in the US as a nurse and it would be a memorial experience in my life. After working, I\'d like to note down of that emotions while working on my notebook.
강사 첨삭
Hello there again, [이름]!
Truly, we can imagine how the first day of work turns out to be, however, we will never know how it will happen. So to lessen your worries, stay alert, prepared, and enthusiastic about everything right before your eyes. It may be challenging but you can absolutely do it!
You might introduce yourself more than a couple of times as well as smile the entire day. Practice these and you will be fine. You will get the hang of things and eventually, enjoy the daily process of your tasks.
Below, I made some grammar suggestions by underscoring some parts of your sentences. Please read them carefully and remember the structures well. Overall, you have written a clear, organized, and meaningful paragraph. Well done!
See you!
-T. Donna~
>> Correct!
However, I can have an expectation of that such as introduction of schedule and greeting with coworkers.
>> However, I can have an expectation of that such as introduction of schedule and greeting coworkers.
Apart from that, about the whole running time schedules like lunch, resting of twice the day and so on.
>> Apart from that, information about the whole running time schedules like lunch, resting twice a day and so on will be discussed.
I just hope that it would be easier to hear the manager\'s speech than I am worried.
>> I just hope that it would be easier to hear the manager\'s speech than I am worried with.
Nevertheless, I am excited to experience a new life in the US as a nurse and it would be a memorial experience in my life.
>> Correct!
After working, I\'d like to note down of that emotions while working on my notebook.
>> After (working/ work), I\'d like to note down those emotions while working on my notebook.
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