What are your fondest childhood memories?(ANSWER)

My fondest childhood memories are... 1. In Jeju Island I went to Jeju Island when I was elementary school 1st grade. I went there with my mom, dad, and my younger sister. Our family lived in a nice lodging house. (I don't remember where I went in Jeju Island, but I'm sure it's a good memory.) 2. In Yeosu(City of Korea) I went to Yeosu at when I was elementary school 6th grade. I went there with my family. I have lived in a first-class hotel.(It was very nice and wonderful!) And I saw Yeosu night sea, and it is famous for song lyrics. Although it was a short trip, but it was the best trip in my life. -END-

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HOMEWORK:

 

What are your fondest childhood memories?

Please answer in complete sentences.

 

YOUR ANSWER:

 

My fondest childhood memories are...
1. In Jeju Island
I went to Jeju Island when I was elementary school 1st grade.
I went there with my mom, dad, and my younger sister.
Our family lived in a nice lodging house.
(I don\'t remember where I went in Jeju Island, but I\'m sure it\'s a good memory.)
2. In Yeosu(City of Korea)
I went to Yeosu at when I was elementary school 6th grade.
I went there with my family.
I have lived in a first-class hotel.(It was very nice and wonderful!)
And I saw Yeosu night sea, and it is famous for song lyrics.
Although it was a short trip, but it was the best trip in my life.

             

 

CORRECTIONS:

 

My fondest childhood memories are...
1. In Jeju Island
I went to Jeju Island when I was in elementary school 1st grade.
I went there with my mom, dad, and my younger sister.
Our family lived in a nice lodging house.
(I don\'t remember where I went in Jeju Island, but I\'m sure it\'s a good memory.)
2. In Yeosu(City of Korea)
I went to Yeosu when I was in elementary school 6th grade.
I went there with my family.
I have lived in a first-class hotel.(It was very nice and wonderful!)
And I saw Yeosu night sea, it is famous for song lyrics.
Although it was a short trip, it was the best trip of my life.

 

** Dear [이름], thank you once again for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. J  And, I like to say, nice memory you had. J

Please take note of the corrections.

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  ---------T. Alexia----------