What are your goals for this year?
학생이 쓴 원문
The first thing is to lose weight.
I\'m keeping going on a diet, but I\'m thinking of losing more weight for my health.
The second thing is to meet the qualifications for getting a job.
I\'m about to take a computer practical test.
I want to finish the test successfully and get a license.
Also, I want to improve my English skills and raise my official English score.
The last thing is to get a new job.
I couldn\'t do anything for health problems, but this year, I want to be more active and succeed in getting a new job.
The reason for preparing for an English interview is the same reason.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework and posting it here. It was an excellent effort and you should keep it up. ^__^ With your goals, I hope everything you desire happens this year at the perfect time. I am rooting for you!!!
-Chammy
The first thing is to lose weight.
I\'m keeping going on a diet, but I\'m thinking of losing more weight for my health.
The second thing is to meet the qualifications for getting a job.
I\'m about to take a computer practical test.
I want to finish the test successfully and get a license.
Also, I want to improve my English skills and raise my official English score.
The last thing is to get a new job.
The last one is to find a new job.
>>Correct
OR
>> Losing weight should come first.
I\'m still following my diet, but I\'m considering dropping a few more pounds for health reasons.
The next one is to fulfill the requirements to be hired.
I have a computer practical exam coming up.
My goal is to pass the exam and obtain a license.
I also want to boost my official English score and get better at English.
I couldn\'t do anything for health problems, but this year, I want to be more active and succeed in getting a new job.
>>I couldn\'t do anything about health problems, but this year, I want to be more active and succeed in getting a new job.
OR
>>Health issues were beyond my control, but this year I intend to take more initiative and get a job.
The reason for preparing for an English interview is the same reason.
>>The reason for preparing for an English interview is the same.
OR
>>For the same reason, I should get ready for an English interview.
>>For the same reason, I should get ready for an English interview.
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