What are your goals for this year? Why? Explain your answer in not more than 5 sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
My goal is everything are be better. like speaking, writing, listening English. because sometimes I get problem with English so if I get better English than it could be understand well.
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름]!
Thank you so much for doing your homework!
I missed you for days!
I hope you are doing great!
See you later ☺
My goal is everything are be better. like speaking, writing, listening English. because sometimes I get problem with English so if I get better English than it could be understand well.
>> My goal is to make everything better. When I say everything it means, to improve my speaking, writing and listening skills because sometimes I have problems with my English skills so if I get better then people could understand me well.
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