What are your greatest professional strengths?

2023-09-26 · 첨삭 강사 Jade

학생이 쓴 원문

I have two years of experience skilled in college, I believe that my skill in handling social media, new apps, the web, and my knowledge in computer software and programs are going to be incredibly beneficial in this job position. With a working cyber world that changes rapidly every day and progresses, your company need someone creative, flexible, and informative about the ins and outs of the Fourth Industrial Revolution. I always take the extra effort to become a better person. I know that I can bring something innovative and growing to your company with my passion and ability. So, I am confident that I\'m the type of person who can be a precious human asset to your company.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! Well done with this one! Thanks for this. See you in class this Wednesday!
~T. Jade^^
Homework: What are your greatest professional strengths?
I have two years of experience skilled in college, I believe that my skill in handling social media, new apps, the web, and my knowledge in computer software and programs are going to be incredibly beneficial in this job position.
>> I have two years of skilled experience from college, and I believe that my skills in managing social media, new apps, the web, as well as my knowledge of computer software and programs, will be incredibly beneficial in this job position.
With a working cyber world that changes rapidly every day and progresses, your company need someone creative, flexible, and informative about the ins and outs of the Fourth Industrial Revolution.
>> With a rapidly evolving cyber world that changes every day and advances, your company needs someone creative, flexible, and knowledgeable about the ins and outs of the Fourth Industrial Revolution.
I always take the extra effort to become a better person.
>> Correct
>> OR: I always go above and beyond to improve myself.
I know that I can bring something innovative and growing to your company with my passion and ability. 
>> Correct
>> OR: With my passion and ability, I am confident that I can contribute to your company\'s growth and innovation.
So, I am confident that I\'m the type of person who can be a precious human asset to your company.
>> Correct
>> OR: I am confident that I can be a valuable asset to your company.

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