What are your hobbies? Write at least two hobbies and explain your answer.
학생이 쓴 원문
My hobbies is reading a historical biography and watching TV.
I read a historical biography I can learn that person\'s great things.
I like watching travel TV programs.
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Hello there, Jimmy!
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See you tomorrow!
Cheers,
Jean~~
What are your hobbies? Write at least two hobbies and explain your answer.
My hobbies is reading a historical biography and watching TV.
>> My hobbies are reading a historical biography and watching TV.
I read a historical biography I can learn that person\'s great things.
>> If I read a historical biography, I can learn about that person\'s great achievements.
I like watching travel TV programs.
>> OR: I enjoy watching travel shows on TV.
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