What are your main ambitions in life?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I answer the question at the moment, I think reaching self-actualization is the most important in my life.
Through many researches, Scientists said People can live healthy almost 100 years.
So I need more than one skills to live ahead 80 years.
Skills should be taken long period at first.
But when I go up each stairs, I probably reach the goal.
강사 첨삭
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Thank you for being consistent.
I\'m sure you would improve in no time.
Take a look at the suggestions below.
Let me know if you need more help.
~~ Teacher Sharon
If I answer the question at the moment, I think reaching self-actualization is the most important in my life.
>> Correct
Through many researches, Scientists said People can live healthy almost 100 years.
Through many researches, Scientists said People can live healthy almost 100 years.
>> Through many studies, scientists have said that people can live healthily for almost 100 years.
So I need more than one skills to live ahead 80 years.
So I need more than one skills to live ahead 80 years.
>> So, I need more than one skill to live for the next 80 years.
Skills should be taken long period at first.
Skills should be taken long period at first.
>> Developing skills should take a long time in the beginning.
But when I go up each stairs, I probably reach the goal.
But when I go up each stairs, I probably reach the goal.
>> However, as I climb each step, I will probably reach my goal.
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