What are your main reasons or considerations/criteria when picking a place to travel to?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I am planning for travel, the primary consideration is familiarity. It can be the familiarity with food, culture, language and people. The reason is that this familiarity will reduce the risk. When I know the language, there is less possibility that I will encounter an accident. Even though I do I can express the incident to the local police. Also, I believe that I can enjoy the travel more when I know the culture and food. By tasting the dishes and visiting the art galleries that I saw on social media, I can enjoy it more thoroughly by comparing it to the reviews and pictures on the media. I have never visited a country that I have no knowledge of. There can be some opposing opinion of me not taking a risk and I know there are some people who regard travel as more like an adventure. However, in my perspective travel should be a relaxing experience and increased risk will result in increased stress. Accordingly, I chose safety over stimulation.
강사 첨삭
Thank you for this Aciel. I\'m with you on this one. Before I travel, I do a research of the place, like what to do, what to eat, what to see. Have a good weekend!
When I am planning for travel, the primary consideration is familiarity.
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It can be the familiarity with food, culture, language and people.
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The reason is that this familiarity will reduce the risk.
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When I know the language, there is less possibility that I will encounter an accident.
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>>> OR: When I know the language, there is a lesser possibility to encounter an accident.
Even though I do I can express the incident to the local police.
>>> Even if I do, I can express myself and explain the incident to the local police.
Also, I believe that I can enjoy the travel more when I know the culture and food.
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By tasting the dishes and visiting the art galleries that I saw on social media, I can enjoy it more thoroughly by comparing it to the reviews and pictures on the media.
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I have never visited a country that I have no knowledge of.
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There can be some opposing opinion of me not taking a risk and I know there are some people who regard travel as more like an adventure.
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>>> OR: There can be some opposing opinion like me not taking a risk and just playing it safe, and I know there are some people who regard travel as more like an adventure.
However, in my perspective travel should be a relaxing experience and increased risk will result in increased stress.
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Accordingly, I chose safety over stimulation.
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