What are your New Year\'s goals?
학생이 쓴 원문
At the beginning of the year, I tend to plan too much. I am greedy,so I try to do everything I can. That\'s why I always think of the phrase \"Slowly, I can take a rest\" in my mind. So many goals have passed through my head again this time. But my new year\'s goal is to be simple. Stay healthy, graduate well, and succeed in getting a job.
And.. I want to know your New year\'s goals, too. Happy New Year~
강사 첨삭
Hello, [이름] [이름]!~
To be honest, it made me happy to see that you asked the same question ^^ To share with you, my goals are to avoid overthinking and to save more money. I think I need to love myself more this year. Hehehe~
Chammy
At the beginning of the year, I tend to plan too much. I am greedy, so I try to do everything I can.
OR
>> I feel greedy to plan a lot at the beginning of the year, so I try to focus on the things I can.
That\'s why I always think of the phrase \"Slowly, I can take a rest\" in my mind. So many goals have passed through my head again this time. But my new year\'s goal is to be simple. Stay healthy, graduate well, and succeed in getting a job.
>> Correct
And.. I want to know your New year\'s goals, too. Happy New Year~
And.. I want to know your New year\'s goals, too. Happy New Year~
>> And... I want to know your New Year\'s goals, too. Happy New Year~
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