What are your New Year\'s resolutions.

2022-01-04 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

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There are many revolutions that I want to achieve. To lose my weight, to memorize many English and Japanese words, to make increasing my physical strength are my goals. But I don\'t know I\'ll keep them.

강사 첨삭

Hello Rachel!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


There are many revolutions that I want to achieve. 

>> I have many resolutions that I want to achieve. 

To lose my weight, to memorize many English and Japanese words, 

>> I want to lose weight and memorize many English and Japanese words.

to make increasing my physical strength are my goals. 

>> I also want to increase my physical strength.

But I don\'t know I\'ll keep them.

>> These are my goals but I don\'t know if I\'ll be able to keep them.

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