What are your New Year\'s resolutions?
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Chammy.
Actually, I was really looking forward to taking your class this morning. We usually had conversations for 5 times a week.
But I have only 2 chances a week this time. So I can hardly wait for your class. I decided to take the test for the certificate of next level after 3 years. Then I will change to the 5 times class at that time.
What are your New Year\'s resolutions?
This is not new plan for the new year. While I was preparing the interview last year, I really wanted to focus on the logo task. But I wasn\'t able to. But I can feel free to think any ideas for the logo contest. I will win more than 20 contests this year. And there is one more.
I read 41 books last year and will read more than 50 books this year. Especially about the stocks. Most successful men like to read books and do as the plans.
So I will do my best as my plans.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Han!
I was used to starting my lessons with you as well, so it feels strange now HAHAHA.,, Now that the interview is over, you can devote more time to one of your favorite hobbies. And I hope that your goals for this year come true! Fighting ^___^
-Chammy
Hi Chammy.
Actually, I was really looking forward to taking your class this morning. We usually had conversations for 5 times a week.
Actually, I was really looking forward to taking your class this morning. We usually had conversations for 5 times a week.
But I have only 2 chances a week this time.
So I can hardly wait for your class.
>>Correct
I decided to take the test for the certificate of next level after 3 years.
>> I decided to take the test for the certificate of the next level after 3 years.
Then I will change to the 5 times class at that time.
Then I will change to the 5 times class at that time.
What are your New Year\'s resolutions?
>>Correct
This is not new plan for the new year.
This is not new plan for the new year.
>>This is not a new plan for the new year.
While I was preparing the interview last year, I really wanted to focus on the logo task.
>> While I was preparing for the interview last year, I really wanted to focus on the logo task.
But I wasn\'t able to. But I can feel free to think any ideas for the logo contest.
>> But I wasn\'t able to. But I can feel free to think of any ideas for the logo contest.
I will win more than 20 contests this year. And there is one more.
I read 41 books last year and will read more than 50 books this year.
Especially about the stocks.
>>Correct
Most successful men like to read books and do as the plans.
>> Most successful men like to read books and do as they plan.
So I will do my best as my plans.
>> So I will do my best as I plan.
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