What are your New Year\'s Resolutions/ Or what are the things you want to have and achieve this year
학생이 쓴 원문
A: This year is really important to me. So, I have a two big plan and small in every month.
First, I want English speak very well. cause every year, English is seems like a little challenging. so I want no longer bother to me.
Second plan is I got a job for me. I’ll graduate this year. so I have to got a job.
But until now I’m not sure what I want it. so, find out good job for me and get!
And every month I have plan each month. January plan is study English very hard and read two book in month.
강사 첨삭
Happy New Year, Hari!
May you make these goals happen this year. And I believe, it is not impossible and not that hard to put it into reality if you make time and effort for it. In addition, I hope you figure out soon what you want to pursue and waste no time doing something that you don\'t like. Fighting!~ ^__^
-Chammy
A: This year is really important to me. So, I have a two big plan and small in every month.
>>This year is really important to me. So, I have two big plans and a small in every month.
First, I want English speak very well. cause every year, English is seems like a little challenging. so I want no longer bother to me.
>>First, I want to speak English very well cause every year, English seems like a little challenging. So, I want it to no longer bother me.
Second plan is I got a job for me. I’ll graduate this year. so I have to got a job.
>> The second plan is, I get a job for myself. I’ll graduate this year so I have to get a job.
But until now I’m not sure what I want it. so, find out good job for me and get!
>>But until now I’m not sure what I want. So, I have to find out a good job for me and get it!
And every month I have plan each month. January plan is study English very hard and read two book in month.
And every month I have plan each month. January plan is study English very hard and read two book in month.
>>And I have a plan every month. My January plan is to study English very hard and read two books in a month.
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