What are your plan with your wife in the future?
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Dear [Name],
After retire my company, I will go to the abroad tour with my wife.
We are going to all countries in the world. If possible, South pole, we want to go.
My wife want to live the center of Seoul.
So I will buy a apartment in Seoul after 5 or 6 years.
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Here are your corrections:
Dear [Name],
>> After retiring in my company, I will tour around the world with my wife.
>> We are going to all the countries in the world.
>> If possible, we want to go to the South pole.
>> My wife wants to live in the center of Seoul so I will buy an apartment in Seoul after 5 or 6 years.
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