What are your plans for Busan?
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Me and my girlfriend will go to Busan in August 13rd. We take a train called KTX to go to Busan.
>>Me and my girlfriend will go to Busan in August 13th. We take a train called KTX to go to Busan.
After arriving, we will eat Milmyeon. Milmyeon is noodle that is famous in Busan. And we will go to the hotel.
>>After arriving, we will eat Milmyeon. Milmyeon is a noodle that is famous in Busan. And we will go to the hotel.
Taking some rest, we will go to some place that is nice to taking pictures. In dinner time, we will eat Gomjangeo.
>>Taking some rest, we will go to some place that is nice for taking pictures. In dinner time, we will eat Gomjangeo.
Gomjangeo is a kind of fish also famous in Busan.
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Since we have a plan to stay at Busan 2days, We will go to the hotel and drink beer and enjoy some card games.
>>Since we have a plan to stay at Busan for 2 days, We will go to the hotel and drink beer and enjoy some card games.
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