What are your plans for the holiday this December?

2019-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

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Holiday is no more special for me, and sometimes, it is a little annoying me. Nowadays, I am deserving my free life, but doing something for myself, such as, studying and working out. However, for the day when people can officially rest and celebrate the day, I do not able to keep my routine. All public libraries are closed, and there are not any study class that I attend. Sadly, I cannot call my friends out and hang out for a full day because most of them are married and have to spend time with their own family. It sounds quite pity, but I am really fine. I know that I should find a little different pleasure with my friends since I quitted my job and started studying again. On this description, I complain my meaningless holiday, but actually, I am going to go two more small year-end parties with my friends in this year and they would be fun.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름],

Thank you for the homework!

Have a good lunch and talk to you later!

Teacher ELLY.

What are your plans for the holiday this December?

Holiday is no more special for me, and sometimes, it is a little annoying me.

>>Holiday is no longer special for me, and sometimes, it is a little annoying.

Nowadays, I am deserving my free life, but doing something for myself, such as, studying and working out.

>>Nowadays, I deserve free life, just doing some things for myself, such as studying and working out.

However, for the day when people can officially rest and celebrate the day, I do not able to keep my routine.

>>However, for a day when people can officially rest and celebrate, I do not seem to be able to keep my usual routine.

All public libraries are closed, and there are not any study class that I attend.

>>All of the public libraries are closed, and there are no study classes that I can attend.

Sadly, I cannot call my friends out and hang out for a full day because most of them are married and have to spend time with their own family.

>>Sadly, I cannot call my friends and hang out for a full day with them, because most are married and have to spend time with their own families.

It sounds quite pity, but I am really fine.

>>It is quite a pity, but I am really fine.

or>>It sounds pitiful, but I do feel fine.

I know that I should find a little different pleasure with my friends since I quitted my job and started studying again.

>>I know that I should find time to have fun with my friends since I quit my job and I started studying again.

On this description, I complain my meaningless holiday, but actually, I am going to go two more small year-end parties with my friends in this year and they would be fun.

>>On this note, I complained about my meaningless holiday routine, but actually, I am going to two more small year-end parties with my friends for this year and it will be fun.

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