What are your plans for your winter vacation?(ANSWER)

2019-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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PLANS : 1. Camps 1) Science Camp When : on Januaty 14th ~ January 16th Where : to other city What : science activity With : alone Why : I wanted to go 2) Church Camp When : on January 21th ~ January 23th Where : (I don't know where we go.) What : religious activities With : church friends Why : to get closer with each other 2. Trips NOTHING :( 3. Study History, Chinese, Korean, Math, Science, Korean history, English, and Technology. :( Worst vacation

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],

 

 Thank you for doing your homework. ^^

 

HOMEWORK:

 

What are your plans for your winter vacation?

Please answer in complete sentences.

 

 YOUR ANSWER:

 

PLANS :

1. Camps
1) Science Camp
When : on Januaty 14th ~ January 16th
Where : to other city
What : science activity
With : alone
Why : I wanted to go

2) Church Camp
When : on January 21th ~ January 23th
Where : (I don\'t know where we go.)
What : religious activities
With : church friends
Why : to get closer with each other

2. Trips
NOTHING :(

3. Study
History, Chinese, Korean, Math, Science, Korean history, English, and Technology. :(
Worst vacation

 

 

CORRECTIONS:

 

 

PLANS:

A. Camps:


1) Science Camp

What: Science activity
Whe
n: On January 14th ~ January 16th
Wher
e: To other city
Who: Going Alone
Wh
y: I wanted to go

2) Church Camp

What: Religious activities
Whe
n: On January 21th ~ January 23th
Wher
e: (I don\'t know where we go.)
Who: Going with church friends
Why:
To get closer with each other

B. Trips
NOTHING :(

C. Study
History, Chinese, Korean, Math, Science, Korean history, English,

and Technology books :(
Worst vacation
!





 

 

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** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊  Please take note of the corrections. ^^

 Cheers!! Take care. J

 

  ---------T. Alexia----------    

                       

           

                         

                         

           

             

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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