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2019-04-12 · 첨삭 강사 Gray

학생이 쓴 원문

I should practice the interview for Deloitte because the interview day has been changed and the headhunter gave some different advice due to the changed interviewers. I found out that interview practice helps me develop better logical speaking in my current workplace. I hope this experience to be inhabited during the usual daily work so that I am always able to persuade customers and my colleagues.

강사 첨삭

I should practice the interview for Deloitte because the interview day has been changed and the headhunter gave some different advice due to the changed interviewers.

>> I should practice the interview for Deloitte. Because, the interview day has been changed, and the headhunter gave some different advices due to the changed interviewers.

I found out that interview practice helps me develop better logical speaking in my current workplace.

>> CORRECT

I hope this experience to be inhabited during the usual daily work so that I am always able to persuade customers and my colleagues.

>> I hope this experience will be inhabited during the usual daily work so that I am always able to persuade customers and my colleagues.

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