What are your short-term and long-term goals?
학생이 쓴 원문
My short-term goals are that improve my English conversation skill and enter a community college in the United States and My long-term goals are that transfer from the community college to the University of California and become a program developer.
강사 첨삭
Good morning Jay!
Your goal pushes you and motivates you to work harder in order for you to obtain a desirable result. I hope that a we get along, you will try to be more expressive.
Thank you for bringing out your thought and channeling them into your keyboard^^
Have an awesome day!
T. Aki
My short-term goals are that improve my English conversation skill and enter a community college in the United States
>>> CORRECT
OR >>> My short-term goals are to improve my English conversational skill and be able to enter a community college in the United States
and My long-term goals are that transfer from the community college to the University of California and become a program developer.
>>> CORRECT
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