What are your strengths and weaknesses when studying?
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First, my strength is doing jumprope. When I was 7 years old, I didn\\\'t do jump rope very well.So I learned it from my sister and then I can do it very well and I can even do double jump rope. Next, my weakness is to throw stuff at our house wall or ground. I didn\'t throw stuffs because I was angry. I threw stuff for fun but my mom said throwing stuff isn\'t a right thing so I promised not to throw things. Third, my strengh is to do multiplication. I can do it very well that I even got 100% at my math academy in 3minutes. I was the only one in the class who got 100% so my math teacher talked to my mom that I did a good job.
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Hello there Ellie!
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It was such a good read.
I hope you enjoyed answering it as well.
See you in class!
Good job
First, my strength is doing jumprope.
>>My strength is doing jump rope.
When I was 7 years old, I didn\'t do jump rope very well.
>>CORRECT
So I learned it from my sister and then I can do it very well and I can even do double jump rope.
>>I learned it from my sister and I was able to do it very well and I can even do a double jump.
Next, my weakness is to throw stuff at our house wall or ground.
>>My weakness is throwing stuff in at our wall or on the ground.
I didn\'t throw stuffs because I was angry.
>>I don\'t throw stuff because I am angry.
I threw stuff for fun but my mom said throwing stuff isn\'t a right thing so I promised not to throw things.
>>I throw stuff for fun but my mom says throwing stuff isn\'t the right thing so I promised not to throw things.
Third, my strengh is to do multiplication.
>>Also, another strength is doing multiplicatin.
I can do it very well that I even got 100% at my math academy in 3minutes.
>>I can do it very well that I even got 100% in my Math academy in 3 minutes.
I was the only one in the class who got 100% so my math teacher talked to my mom that I did a good job.
>>I was the only one in the class who got 100% so my Math teacher told my mom that I did a good job.
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