What are your strengths aside from being a people-person?
학생이 쓴 원문
I am a fast learner with my sharp eyes and open minded to new culture and people, so that I adapt quickely in changes and work more effectively.
Also I easily catch people\'s needs or uncomfortableness and I am proactive, therefore I provide proper service depending on person.
Lastly, one of my motto is development, I am progressive and always craving for learning and improve myself which is match your company\'s looking for.
I am confident that I can nail my job and duties, if I become a cabin crew.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Rachel!
I can see a very professional way of answering questions below. A few chosen vocabulary answers the question immediately and specifically.
I am so proud of your improvements daily.
Read my comments below and keep them in mind to your next writing.
See you in class!
-T. Donna~
>> Correct! Very good sentence!
Or: I am a fast learner with my sharp eyes and I am open minded to new culture and people, so that I adapt quickly in changes and work more effectively.
Also I easily catch people\'s needs or uncomfortableness and I am proactive, therefore I provide proper service depending on person.
>> Also I easily catch people\'s needs or uncomfortableness and I am proactive, therefore I provide proper service depending on the person.
Lastly, one of my motto is development, I am progressive and always craving for learning and improve myself which is match your company\'s looking for.
>> Lastly, one of my motto is development, I am progressive and always craving for learning and improving myself which is a match with what your company\'s looking for.
I am confident that I can nail my job and duties, if I become a cabin crew.
>> Correct!
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