What are your study habits?
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When i was child, I wasn\'t study a lot and My score was low. But when i was 18year old, I started study. But i still didn\'t like studying.
When i was adult, I realized that without studying make a poor life. So I studied harder at the univercity and company.
I have been study everyday, I think that is my positive habit.
In the other hand, Thesedays There are a lot of electronic devices. So during study, concentraing is really harder that in the past. That is my bad habit.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Jun!
When i was adult, I realized that without studying make a poor life.
In the other hand, These days There are a lot of electronic devices.
Thank you so much for taking time in answering the question. You really did well! :)
~ T. Camille
When I was child, I wasn\'t study a lot and My score was low.
>> When I was child, I didn\'t study a lot and my score was low.
But when I was 18year old, I started study.
>> But when I turned 18 years old, I started studying.
But I still didn\'t like studying.
>> CORRECT!
When i was adult, I realized that without studying make a poor life.
>> When I became an adult, I realized that without studying, your life would be hard.
So I studied harder at the univercity and company.
>> So I studied harder in the university, and worked in a company.
I have been study everyday, I think that is my positive habit.
>> I have been studying everyday, and I think that is my positive habit.
In the other hand, These days There are a lot of electronic devices.
>> On the other hand, these days, there are a lot of electronic devices.
So during study, concentraing is really harder that in the past.
>> So while studying, concentrating was really hard for me in the past.
That is my bad habit.
>> CORRECT!
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