What are your thoughts about recycling?

2018-09-05 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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The environment in the world have changed very quickly. We all hear and learn how fast our environment destroy from news and a lot of media. That's the reason why we have to recycle trash. Our country introduced the recycling policy long times ago. People don't complain to do distribute their home trash, but it is not easy to keep whole trash in the house before the city we are living take it. We can only put the trash away once a week. Everybody don't want to keep their trash in their home because if we keep it for a long time, bugs come out from the trash. This kind of reason, I have seen somebody who dispose trash on the day our city doesn't permit. We know that recycling is really important for our future. It is also effective to use unnecessary trash again. All people in the world have to save our world and it is the way for saving our world.

강사 첨삭

This is thought-provoking, Sir [이름]!

You were right, recycling our waste has been the staple in protecting our planet. I hope we should act now before it\'s too late. Brilliant thoughts, keep on writing!

~Teacher Eunice


The environment in the world have changed very quickly.

>>> The environment has changed quickly. 

We all hear and learn how fast our environment destroy from news and a lot of media.

>>> We all hear, and learn how fast our environment gets destroyed from the news.  

That\'s the reason why we have to recycle trash.

>>> Correct!

Our country introduced the recycling policy long times ago.

>>> Our country introduced the recycling policy long time ago.

People don\'t complain to do distribute their home trash, but it is not easy to keep whole trash in the house before the city we are living take it.

>>> People don\'t complain about segregating their trash, but it is not easy to keep it in the house before the garbage collectors collect it.  

We can only put the trash away once a week. 

>>> We can only throw trash once a week.

Everybody don\'t want to keep their trash in their home because if we keep it for a long time, bugs come out from the trash. 

>>> Everybody don\'t want to keep their trash in their home because if we keep it for a long time, bugs will come out from the trash. 

This kind of reason, I have seen somebody who dispose trash on the day our city doesn\'t permit.

>>> This kind of reason, I have seen somebody who disposes trash on the day that our city doesn\'t permit.

>>> OR: I have seen people who dispose trash even if it isn\'t the garbage collection day.

We know that recycling is really important for our future.

>>> Correct!

It is also effective to use unnecessary trash again.  

>>> Correct!

>>> OR: It is also helpful for the environment to recycle our waste.

All people in the world have to save our world and it is the way for saving our world.

>>> All people have to save our world, and it is the way for saving our world.

>>> OR: All people can save our planet by reducing, reusing, and recycling our waste.

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