What are your thoughts don\'t the air quality in your country?
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I think my country\'s the air quality is bad because fine dust and Covid-19 come from China.
But dawn air is very good 👍 (fresh air)
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What are your thoughts don\'t the air quality in your country?
I think my country\'s the air quality is bad because fine dust and Covid-19 come from China.
>> I think my country\'s air quality is poor because of the fine dust and COVID-19 that came from China.
But dawn air is very good 👍 (fresh air)
>> But the air at dawn is very good. You can enjoy fresh air.
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