What are your thoughts on decentralization in Korea?
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What are your thoughts on decentralization in Korea?
It is not possible because already all the important infrastructures are based in Seoul.
I think it is inevitable,so we should think about alleviating it in another way.
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What are your thoughts on decentralization in Korea?
It is not possible because already all the important infrastructures are based in Seoul.
It is not possible because already all the important infrastructures are based in Seoul.
>> The way I see it, decentralization in Korea is impracticable since all the important infrastructures are already based in Seoul.
I think it is inevitable,so we should think about alleviating it in another way.
I think it is inevitable,so we should think about alleviating it in another way.
>> correct
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