what are your thoughts on immigrant families not wanting to go back to their home countrie after ret
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I know one has homing instinct.
I think that some immigrants want to leave for their home countries, when they are lonely with their daily lives and aren\'t satisfied with ones. The decision is up to their thought and the condition of the life, whether they go backto their home countries or stay at the current place. If they don\'t think they can get some or more benefits from a foreign life, they will leave abroad. Because we have that instinct. It\'s like flying back to mom\'s womb and getting ready to pass away there.
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Jean
I know one has homing instinct.
>> I know that humans have some kind of homing instinct.
I think that some immigrants want to leave for their home countries, when they are lonely with their daily lives and aren\'t satisfied with ones.
>> I think that some immigrants want to leave for their home countries when they are lonely with their daily lives and aren\'t satisfied with the same.
The decision is up to their thought and the condition of the life, whether they go backto their home countries or stay at the current place.
>> Returning home depends on their state of mind, thoughts, and the condition of their lives.
If they don\'t think they can get some or more benefits from a foreign life, they will leave abroad. Because we have that instinct.
>> If we think living overseas wouldn\'t give us some or more benefits, we would certainly leave and return home because we have that instinct.
It\'s like flying back to mom\'s womb and getting ready to pass away there.
>> It\'s like flying back to our mom\'s womb and getting ready to pass away there.
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