What are your thoughts on Korean politics?
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These days people in Korea are extremely polarized. If something bad happens, politicians do not resolve it but start to blame each other. As mass media has become a public sphere, fake news and baseless doubts spread easily. The public accepts the media uncritically, and politicians use it to beat the other side.
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What are your thoughts on Korean politics?
These days people in Korea are extremely polarized.
>> or: The current climate in Korea is marked by stark polarization.
If something bad happens, politicians do not resolve it but start to blame each other.
>> When something bad happens, politicians don\'t resolve it but instead start bla[이름]g each other.
As mass media has become a public sphere, fake news and baseless doubts spread easily.
>> As mass media has evolved into a public sphere, fake news and baseless doubts have begun to spread easily.
The public accepts the media uncritically, and politicians use it to beat the other side.
>> The public tends to accept the media uncritically, allowing politicians to use it as a tool against their opponents.
>> or: Politicians exploit the media, capitalizing on the public\'s tendency to consume information without critical scrutiny.
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