What are your thoughts on people who always check their weight?
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I think thoughts on people always check their weight is it is okay because they are interested in health and I always check my weight.
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What are your thoughts on people who always check their weight?
I think thoughts on people always check their weight is it is okay because they are interested in health and I always check my weight.
>> I think it\'s fine for people to always check their weight if the reason is that they are interested in their health.
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