What are your thoughts on pollution nowadays?

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Nowadays people take air pollution seriously in Korea.

>> CORRECT!

Only except the late summer and the early autumn, yellow dust and fine dust fulfill the atmosphere all the way.

>> Except from late summer and early autumn, fine, yellow dust filled the atmosphere all over Korea.

The skin, eyes, nose and respiratory system are directly affected by air pollution.

>> CORRECT!

The risk of allergic rhinitis, conjunctivitis and respiratory disease is increasing.

>> CORRECT!

Air pollution is threatening the health of children, the elderly and some adults who have the weak immunity.

>> Air pollution is threatening the health of children, the elderly and some adults who have weak immunity.

It is not just about air pollution.

>> CORRECT!

The Planet has been polluted by the human beings.

>>  This planet has been polluted by human beings.

When we drink clean water, eat clean food and breathe in clean air, we can live a healthy life.

>>  This planet has been polluted by human beings.

We should try to prevent and reduce the pollution.

>> CORRECT!

Otherwise, we would be suffered from it.

>> Otherwise, we would suffer from it greatly.

Please remember the Planet is not ours. We just borrow it from the next generation!

>> Please remember that this planet is not ours, we just borrowed it from the next generation!